Excerpt Friday – The Christmas Miracle

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From Author Phyliss Miranda  – THE CHRISTMAS MIRACLE

 

AChristmasMiracleMiranda1WebChristmas 1889
Texas Panhandle 

Children should not suffer for the sins of their fathers, Mattie Jo Ashley thought, as she put two mugs of beer on the table for a couple of regulars of the Longhorn Saloon.

Lucas Jones had posted the House Rules on each wall. Although the watering hole was one of only two in the temperance colony known as Carroll Creek, Texas, its owner wanted to make sure everyone understood what he expected. He wouldn’t stand for a rowdy crowd that might run away his patrons who never missed three opportunities.  A good tent meeting. A good church sermon. And, a good drink with a quiet game of cards. . . .

The swinging doors flew open and her friend and fellow saloon girl Violet rushed in. Not bothering to acknowledge anyone around, she literally screamed, “Mattie Jo!” She rushed on without taking a breath. “The baby’s taken a turn for the worse.”

Blood ran like cold well water through Mattie Jo’s veins. “Slow down, Violet, and tell me what is going on with her.” Her heart beat out of control. She couldn’t lose another family member. “Who is watching Katie?”

“Brady is.” Violet grabbed the edge of the bar. “I caught your brother right before he left  to milk the Garner’s cows, so he stayed because I needed to come tell you your baby sister’s really bad.”

“Tell me exactly what’s going on.” Mattie Jo’s asked again. With each word her legs got weaker. It wasn’t typical of Violet to get so upset, even though it involved Mattie Jo’s baby sister, Katie.

“She won’t eat. Her eyes are more matted than ever. One is completely shut.”

“Does Brady know to keep warm towels on her eyes?”  Mattie Jo bit her lip. “And, wash her face frequently? He’s only thirteen.”

“I know, but he’s taking good care of her. Her fever has gone up. Cool towels haven’t helped, so I gave her a cold bath. By the time I left, it still hadn’t brought down her fever. I don’t want to upset you, but it’s a whole bunch higher. She’s even more listless, refusing her bottle and is coughing more. I think she seems

to be having a little trouble breathing.”

All of the worsening conditions Violet described balled up and hit Mattie Jo between the eyes. She swallowed hard and looked over the crowded saloon at her boss, Lucas Jones, who was delivering a tray of drinks to another table of card-playing cowboys.  Tears brimmed in her eyes, just thinking about the possibility that she might lose her precious sister.  She needed to go home and take care of her, but also had to work her shift because the jar in the kitchen out at her place had only three pennies and a dime in it. Not enough to pay for the doctor to make a house call especially three miles outside of town.

Felicia Filly
When I'm not keepin' all these Fillies in line, I'm practicing my roping so I can catch me a cowboy. Me and Jasper (my mule) are two peas in a pod. Both of us are as crotchety as all get-out.
Updated: September 18, 2014 — 10:18 pm

9 Comments

  1. I want to read on….

  2. Hi Phyliss!

    Well, gosh, you know how much we loved this story at Prairie Rose Publications, right? LOL And I’m so glad to see it as a single-sell with a gorgeous cover of its very own.

    Now…let’s see…we’ve got a Valentine’s Day anthology coming up…

    Hugs, dear friend–all the very best to you!
    Cheryl

  3. Love the excerpt, Phyllis!!

  4. Sounds awesome!

  5. Gosh. I love reading historical romance set at Christmas. I’m already hooked and so looking forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing. Cathie

  6. You’ve got me hooked. I want to read more. Thus far, excellent story.

  7. I definitely want to know who comes to help Mattie Jo as she struggles to save her sister, Katie’s life. Interesting excerpt. Father’s sins? Why is she working in a saloon? Where are her parents?

    Christmas is my favorite holiday so I like to read stories set in that time period. Love Christmas miracles too.
    Thanks for sharing!

  8. Phyliss, I always enjoy your stories. The opening line in A Christmas Miracle has stayed with me since I first read it: “Children should not suffer for the sins of their fathers…” Such a poignant statement, and it perfectly sets the tone for what’s to come.

    I can’t wait to read what you release next. 🙂

  9. I liked this story when I read it in the anthology. I’m glad you have it out in a single now.
    Sorry I’m so tardy.
    I wish you great success…

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