The Story Behind the Story of LAKOTA PRINCESS

Good Morning, Afternoon or Evening & Happy Tuesday!

Since I’m on this theme lately of the Story behind the story of several of my different books, I thought I’d backtrack a little and tell you some of the story behind the writing of LAKOTA PRINCESS.

LAKOTA PRINCESS was the first book I ever wrote under deadline and was my second book ever published.    I love this cover of LAKOTA PRINCESS, thus, I’ve made it nice and big.

Originally the idea of LAKOTA PRINCESS was to tell the story of a very little known fact about the West.  I ran across the info on doing research — and it was fascinating to me.  Here in America there was a German settlement (I now forget the name) where they set up a “Kingdom” complete with King, subjects, etc.  So originally, the idea was to bring this little known fact to light and to tell a romantic story at the same time.

My editor, however, although she liked the idea, she asked me to bring the story to England.  And of course I said yes.  The idea of bringing an entire Native American story to England fascinated me.

So off I went with my characters to England. 

This required a bit more research on my part, because I knew practically nothing about England — and here I was bringing the whole story overseas.

I’d sketched out the opening story line to the opening song of BEAUTY AND THE BEAST — the Disney version.  That opening song and the narrative that goes with it inspired the entire beginning of my story, where the princess is escaping Europe under threat of her life.  AS I sit here writing this, I can’t recall the exact tune of that song, all I remember is that it set the tone of the “escape with one’s life in hand.”

Some of the research I did was done in microfilm at the library — there was no internet at that time and the only place where I could find the book that I needed was offered in microfilm only — it was a book written by George Catlin in the 1840’s where he documented the experiences of about 6-10 representatives of one of the Western Tribes in England.  It was fascinating — for one thing the Indians were treated almost like we would treat a rock star today — women were particularly thrilled with them and one of the Indians fell in love with a “black-eyed beauty” from England, married her and stayed with her in England.  What became of them, I don’t know, but their observations of the English culture and England’s response to them was hardly what I thought it would be.  In fact, the research was so fascinating, my editor had to remind me at one point that I had better get down to work on the book — and she was right.  After all, this was my first book written under deadline.

Let me tell you some of the things I learned as I did my research — one of the Indians commented to Catlin that he believed the English were uncivilized and that their culture was doomed to fail.  Catlin asked him why and his comment was that he had been watching and observing women with dogs — who cared for their dogs more than they did the starving children in the street.  And that was a thing that he couldn’t understand:  how could a person who had so much ignore the condition of the children in the streets, who were treated as though they were rats rather than children. He told Catlin that it made him yearn for home, where children were honored and fed properly.  I found this an interesting piece of knowledge, which I used in my book.  Another fact about England that I found interesting (and so my hero discovers this immediately upon landing in England) is that the waters were so polluted, that the water couldn’t be drunk.  It was one of the main reasons why so many people drank wine — not water with their meals.  Early on in my story, the hero observes the pollution of the water and makes a determination NOT to drink the water.

The pictures of this gentleman — this one and the one above are of George Catlin — and the painting of the Indian is a Catlin painting, also.  There were other things I discovered, and because the princess in my book is an actual princess, I had to research that, also.

One of the things that I realized  about writing under deadline is that you have to listen to your characters — and it’s my opinion that my job as an author is to write their story from their viewpoint — if only because if I keep trying to insert my own morals or viewpoint of their lives, the story will often stop dead — and only by going back and finding out what I did wrong will again move the story along with the characters solving their own problems.

So imagine this:  here I was writing my first story under deadline and on about page 300 or so, the story stops and the characters absolutely refuse to talk to each other or to solve their own problems.  I was stunned, and also a little concerned.  It wasn’t as though I’d given myself all the time in the world to write this story.  As it turns out, after much searching and searching to discover what was wrong, I finally found it — the character problem that had my hero and heroine up in arms.  I had to backtrack to about page 50 of the book and rewrite coming forward — all the while with only a month or two left to finish the book and turn it in.

As it turns out, I did get the book written in time and to my editor just barely making the deadline — off to the left here is the original cover of LAKOTA PRINCESS — yes, it’s a romance, it’s definitely the Native American Historical genre, but it’s also very much a mystery — and a mystery the hero must solve quickly if he is to save the woman that he loves from an assassination bullet.

I’ll be giving away a free book today to some blogger — so come on in and leave a comment!

Karen Kay
KAREN KAY aka GEN BAILEY is the multi-published author of American Indian Historical Romances. She has written for such prestigious publishers as AVON/HarperCollins, Berkley/Penguin/Putnam and Samhain Publishing. KAREN KAY’S great grandmother was Choctaw Indian and Kay is honored to be able to write about the American Indian Culture.
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Updated: September 4, 2012 — 12:44 pm

29 Comments

  1. Karen, I love to hear these ‘story behind the story’ tidbits – it always fascinates me to learn what inspires other writers. Isn’t it fun to see what little rabbit trails in our research can lead us to.

  2. What a fascinating story. I can just imagine the attention the Indians received in England. But the amount of research you had to do boggles the mind. I’m glad you finished it on time and saw the book release. Both of the covers are striking. I’m not sure which I like best. Wishing you lots of success, Filly Sister!

  3. Thank you for a most interesting post. We don’t realize or think about the perception of things people have. It often takes an outside eye to cut to the heart of a situation. The observations about children, dogs, and water were right on and reflected what reformers finally were bringing to light and working to correct.
    The research portion of writing would be my favorite. It is so very easy to get lost in it. I wouldn’t want to be pulled out by the necessity to write and meet a deadline.

    Thanks for the insight.

  4. Your new cover is breathtaking, Karen. What a fascinating story. And so well researched. Caitlin’s paintings are so beautiful. You can just imagine him among those Indians painting their portraits and scenes from their lives.
    Thanks for a very interesting blog today.

  5. Both covers are beautiful! The story behind Lakota Princess is fascinating. You really devoted a lot of time to research! I am sure the book must be fascinting to and I look forward to reading it.

  6. Enjoyed reading the comments. I like a bit of mystery in the reading I do so am anxious to see how it is in this book. It sounds really good.
    I like the cover

  7. Karen,very interesting post,love the covers on both,,always a good read

  8. Both covers are wonderful, but the new one stands out more for me. Always enjoyable to read the background bits you share with your books. Thanks for sharing with us! 😀

  9. Hi Winnie!

    It’s true. Before I started doing research, I looked upon it as a chore — now I look upon research as pleasure. 🙂

  10. Hi Kay, Great reading this morning. My problem with research is getting too involved with the research!
    This story sounds great. I’m glad you’re bringing it back. Both covers are wonderful.

  11. Hi Linda!

    Yes the research for that second book was incredible — but well worth it because of all I learned. Compared to that my research nowadays (and particularly so with the internet) is so much easier. 🙂

  12. Hi Patricia!

    Right on with your observations. And the research…it is so fascinating, like you said. I hope,by the way, that you’ve received your book — I did mail it last week I believe or perhaps the week before — I lose track of time. Thanks for your ever insightful post!

  13. Good Morning Elizabeth!

    Yes, Catlin was/is my favorite “Go-to” for research on Indians — unprejudiced — many accounts of the time were prejudiced and placed on the Indians the blackness of the soul usually doing the writing.

    One also has to be careful in research because of the lies and tales that are sometimes told. Interesting field, research…

  14. Hi Lori!

    So nice to hear from you. Yes, the research was a little daunting, but well worth it — like I said, it included the American Indian side of the story, some background on the royal family and the life and style of England. But I love this story — it remains one of my most favorites.

  15. Hi Joye!

    It’s so interesting that England in particular lends itself well to the mystery. It came naturally as my hero made his trek across the ocean. And the mystic of the royal family at that time also added to the flavor of the story. It was fun to write, actually.

  16. Hi Vickie!

    I love both covers, too. It would be hard to me to say which is my favorite since I really love them both. Thanks for your post.

  17. Hi Colleen!

    Ah, the covers — they truly are works of art — and the publishing companies really do an incredible job when it comes to covers. Beautiful!

  18. Hi Mary J!

    Me, too! Me, too! I get really caught up in the research — and with I wonder what might have happened if… 🙂

    Thanks for your delightful post.

  19. As always, I enjoy hearing about your back stories and research. I’m sure you love the computer over microfilm! And I have to totally agree with how the Indians thought of England as uncivilized! And they called the Indians savages when they took care of their people and the land so much better. All lovely covers!

  20. Hi Catslady!

    Yes, it was an eye opener for me. One other thing I should say about doing research is that my eyes have been opened so to speak — when one researches real history, it does much to cause one to realize that we have been mightily lied to.

  21. Hi Karen! I love to read about the research and background information you post. It just fascinates me how much work is done to create a wonderful book. I love your characters and stories you create in each and every book. Hats off to you !

  22. Very interesting. Love the steamy cover!

  23. Hi Lisa G!

    Oh, my goodness, you’ve made my day with your graciousness. 🙂 Thanks for the comment.

  24. Me, too, Connie. Me, too. How I love romance.

  25. I enjoy these posts and that is a beautiful cover!

  26. Kay,

    Of course, another wonderful post. I loved learning about your experience with deadlines…It is different. I love the cover of the book…

    Love you girl….
    Melinda

  27. Hi Estella!

    Thank you so much!

  28. Hi Melinda!

    I owe you yet another email — bear with me as I check my schedule with my husband — deadlines — I’m sort of suffering right now from lack-of-deadline-osis. 🙂

  29. Kay, both these covers are wonderful, but I think I like the new one better. Just by a little…LOLLOL Oh, I felt your anxiety when you wrote about your characters not talking to you and you being under a deadline. That would scare me to death! You must work well under pressure. This is really an interesting post–as always.
    Hugs,
    Cheryl

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