THE NAME GAME

I am a collector of names.  Have been, ever since I was a kid.  Probably because I always wished for a different one, myself.  Mine wasn’t really exotic, but it was…different.  Cheryl.  My parents decided on the pronunciation of “Chair-yl” rather than the more common way of saying it.  The way a million other people sad it…with a “SH” sound, “Sheryl,” rather than the hard “CH” sound.

So when I began writing, I knew my characters had to have ‘good’ names—names that fit.  Names that weren’t too strange, but not too common.  Names that were appropriate for the time period, the setting, and the culture.

The hero, of course, had to have a name that was also something that could be whispered by the heroine in the throes of passion, yet something that would be tough enough on the villain’s lips to strike a modicum of fear in his heart, just by uttering it.

Because I was writing historical western romance, I decided to pull up a chart that would give me an accurate “slice of life”—possible names for my heroes.  According to US Social Security records, the top ten names for men in 1880 were:  John, William, James, Charles, George, Frank, Joseph, Thomas, Henry, and Robert.

Okay, I could maybe work with the top four.  In fact, the first book I ever wrote was about a gunslinger of this time period called ‘Johnny Starr.’ 

And William could be shortened to ‘Will’—still masculine; but never ‘Willie.’  James—very masculine, and unwittingly, calls up the rest of the line—‘Bond.  James Bond.’  At least, it does for me.  I could even go with Jamie.  Charles is pushing it.  George, Frank, and Joe are names I have and would use for a minor character, but I’d never use those for my hero.  They’re somehow just too ordinary.  Thomas? Again, a great secondary character name, but not a show-stopper.  Henry…eh.  And Robert is just ‘okay.’

I fast-forwarded a hundred years to 1980.  Here are the top 10:  Michael, Christopher, Jason, David, James, Matthew, Joshua, John, Robert, and Joseph.  Four of the same names were there, though not in the same poll position.  By 2009, only William remained in the top 10.  John had fallen to #20, James to #17, Joseph to #13.  The others had been replaced, not all by modern names, but most in the top 10 were surprisingly “old fashioned.”

2009:  Jacob, Michael, Ethan, Joshua, Daniel, Alexander, Anthony, William, Christopher, Matthew.

This told me something.  If you aren’t too wild with the names you choose, you have quite a lot of choices!  We know that Jacob, Michael, Joshua, Daniel, and Matthew were Biblical names.  Just because they weren’t on the “top 10” list in 1880 doesn’t mean they weren’t being used—a lot!

Another source of names for that time period is family records.  If you go back through old family documents, it’s amazing to find some of the odd names that cropped up.

Still maybe not ‘protagonist’ material, but your secondary characters could benefit.  And who knows?  You may find the perfect ‘hero’ name!

No matter what you choose, remember these rules, too:

1. Sound and compatibility—Say your character’s name aloud.  Does the first name go well with the last name you’re using?  Be careful about running the name together—“Alan Nickerson” or “Jed Dooly” may not be good choices.  Avoid rhyming names such as “Wayne Payne”—and try to stay away from cutesy names that might make your hero the focus of ridicule.

2. Uniqueness—I’m sure my parents were only trying to be ‘unique’ by pronouncing my name differently than the other 99.9% of the people in the world would automatically say it, but you don’t want your hero to have such an odd name that readers trip over it every time they come to it.  Louis L’Amour was a master at coming up with ‘different’ names that were simple.  Hondo Lane, Ring Sackett, Shalako, Conagher…and the list goes on.

3. Genealogy—Does it play into your characters’ storyline?  If so, you may want to come up with a neat twist somehow on a common name.  In my first manuscript, Brandon’s Gold, the gunfighter, Johnny Starr, is named for his father, but the names are reversed.  His father was Thomas Jonathan Brandon.  He is known as Thomas in the story.  Johnny was named Jonathan Thomas Brandon.  He goes by Johnny.  This keeps a theme alive in my story of the ‘fathers and sons’ of this family, and their relationships.  It weighs heavily, because Thomas is dying, but Johnny doesn’t know it.  They’ve been estranged for many years.

When Johnny’s own son is born, his wife, Katie, changes the name they’ve decided on just before the birth.  She makes Johnny promise to name him after himself and his father, Thomas Jonathan, bringing the circle around once more, and also completing the forgiveness between Johnny and his dying father.

4. Meaning—This might somehow play into your story and is good to keep track of.  What do your characters’ names mean?  This is a great tool to have at your disposal when you are writing—it can be a great conversation piece somewhere, or explain why your villain is so evil.

5. Nicknames and initials—this can be more important than you think.  You may need to have your hero sign something or initial something.  Don’t make him be embarrassed to write his initials and don’t give him a name that might be shortened to an embarrassing nickname.

In my book, Fire Eyes, the protagonist has an odd name—Kaedon Turner.  I gave him an unusual first name to go with a common last name.  I learned later that Caden, shortened to Cade, though not common for the time was not unheard of.  Kaedon, shortened to Kaed, was just a different variation.  It sets him apart from the other marshals, and emphasizes his unique past in a subtle way.

Below are some excerpts from Fire Eyes, available  through The Wild Rose Press, Amazon, and Barnes and Noble.  I hope you enjoy!

EXCERPTS FROM FIRE EYES:

Marshal Kaed Turner has just been delivered to Jessica’s doorstep, wounded and   unconscious by the Choctaw Indians.  This is part of their first conversation, Kaed’s introduction.

 “Just pull.” Her patient moistened his lips. “Straight up. That’s how it went in.”

She wanted to weep at the steel in his voice, wanted to comfort him, to tell him she’d make it quick. But, of course, quick would never be fast enough to be painless. And how could she offer comfort when she didn’t even know what to call him, other than Turner?

“You waitin’ on a…invitation?” A faint smile touched his battered mouth. “I’m fresh out.”

Jessica reached for the tin star. Her fingers closed around the uneven edges of it. No. She couldn’t wait any longer. “What’s your name?” Her voice came out jagged, like the metal she touched.

His bruised eyes slitted as he studied her a moment. “Turner. Kaedon Turner.”

Jessica sighed. “Well, Kaedon Turner, you’ve probably been a lot better places in your life than this. Take a deep breath and try not to move.”

He gave a wry chuckle, letting his eyes drift completely closed. “Do it fast. I’ll be okay.”

She nodded, even though she knew he couldn’t see her. “Ready?”

“Go ahead.”

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From Kaed’s POV—Finding out his “angel’s” name!

“I need to stop the bleeding. You were lucky.”

“One lucky sonofabitch.”

“I meant, because it went all the way through. So we don’t have to…to dig it out.” There was that hesitation again, but he already knew what it was she didn’t want to have to say to him. He said it instead.

“All we have to do is burn it.”

She let her breath out in a rush, as if she’d been holding it, dreading just how she was going to tell him. “Right. Sounds like the voice of experience.”

“Yeah.”

She touched his good arm and he reached up for her, his warm, bronze hand swallowing her smaller one. Her fingers were cold, and he could tell she was afraid, no matter how indifferent she tried to act.

“You’ve got one on me,” he muttered.

“What’s that?”

“Your name. Or, do I just call you angel?”

He felt the smile again, knew he had embarrassed her a little, but had pleased her as well.

“Jessica Monroe, at your service, Mr. Turner.”

“Don’t go all formal on me.” He paused, collecting his scattering, hard-to-hold thoughts. “I like Kaed better.”

“Better than Mr. Turner?”

He opened his eyes a crack and watched as she gave him a measuring look, her cinnamon gaze holding his probing stare for a moment. “What you’re doin’ for me warrants a little more intimacy, don’t’cha think, Jessica?”

She glanced back down at the seeping wound, worrying her lower lip between even, white teeth. Her auburn hair did its best to escape its bun.

Kaed’s thoughts jumped and swirled as he tried to focus on her, wondering disjointedly how she’d look if she let her hair tumble free and unbound. And her eyes. Beautiful. A man could get lost in the secrets of her eyes.
Maybe he should’ve used a word other than intimacy.

Cheryl Pierson
A native Oklahoman, I've been influenced by the west all my life. I love to write short stories and novels in the historical western and western romance genres, as well as contemporary romantic suspense! Check my Amazon author page to see my work: http://www.amazon.com/author/cherylpierson
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19 Comments

  1. I am married to a William and must tell him he has a common hero name 😉 But the guy goes by Marty. His dad is a William who goes by Jack. I told him that I was not giving our son William as a first name to go by the middle.

    It is amazing how we attach alpha or beta to our heroes based on their names. And I wonder how difficult it is to find those perfect female names to pair with the male…like is this a chicken and an egg thing?

    I could cogitate on names for quite a while! Thanks for an interesting post.

    Peace, Julie

  2. Very fun and interesting post, CHAIRyl. I search high and low for the right character names, that’s for sure. I confess to naming a lot of secondary characters after friends and family LOL.

    I myself have always hated my name as it has been mispronounced and misspelled my entire life. Grrrrr. We tried to give our kids plain names that no one could mess up LOL. My grandbaby’s best friend in preschool is named Caden/Kaden etc. I’ll have to see how he spells it. oxoxox

  3. Loved the post. I write historical westerns and try for strong, unusual names. Funny thing is I ALWAYS wind up using a biblical name in the end for my hero and heroine.

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    Good post. Interessting topic and many good points. Working with chilren, I see many variations of names. The current trend of creative naming is distressing in a way. Parents make up names, give weird names and creative spelling is rampant. It is confusing and difficult for teachers among others. You wonder what they will think when they are older.

    My nephew married an Irish girl and their 3 children’s names are irish and not common in the US. Lately, I have seen the daughters name, Siobhan which is pronounced Shevawn, used in a few books. No one yet has known how to pronounce it.

    We all want our children’s (heroes and heroines)names to be special. The thing to remember is different and special doesn’t heve to be weird. Remember they do need to grow with it and live with it.

    Enjoyed the excerpts. Like the name Kaedon. Too bad I won’t have anymore sons to name. Look forward to reading the book.

  5. CHAIR-yl? Really? I didn’t know that.
    I’ve been fighting a reflex I seem to have to name all my heroes, one syllable names with a long A sounds. It’s just hard to resist. I suppose that sounds STRONG to me for some reason.

    I sometimes use some other long vowel sound, but even that’s pretty knee-jerk.

    Wade, Rafe, Gabe, Clay, Jake
    HEY! I haven’t used DAVE yet! All right!

    So I’ve been trying to mix it up. Silas, Seth, Ethan, Red, Michael, Alex, Logan. Elijah, Daniel, Wyatt. You can still see the long vowel sounds there, but I’m making some progress. 🙂

  6. My newest grandson is named Dale William Lorenz JR. to be called DJ. His two grandpa’s are Dale and William. Many relatives have tried to tell my son and daughter-in-law that you cannot have a junior unless the name is exactly the same. We feel you can name a child what you want as long as it doesn’t cause ridicule. DJ’s daddy is also a big fan of Dale JR. race car driver but that has nothing to do with the name. They wanted to honor both grandfathers. And DJ fits the little guy just right!

  7. I have a Paul, Joe and Tom, too. Dale might work. I might be forgetting some of them, too.

    MIGHT???

    Thanks, Connie. 🙂

  8. Cheryl, one of the things I like best about writing is naming my characters. There’s such freedom in knowing I can name them whatever I want. Makes me giddy. I also love searching for just the right name. I have several name books and they’re well used. Thanks for an interesting post.

  9. ooh, good to know how to pronounce your name in case we ever meet 🙂

    the name game…sounds like the woes that come with naming children 🙂

    i LOVED the excerpts!!
    what a wonderful story…it’s on my tbl can’t wait to get to it!! 🙂

  10. Hey Julie!

    I love names and I do think you are right about how we sit and think about names for our characters as much as we might for a newborn child! LOL In my family, my oldest sister is named Mary Annette, but was called Annette from the day she was born. Both of our grandmothers were named Mary, and she was the first grandchild.
    My parents had gotten considerably more creative by the time I came along. Cheryl Kathlyn. So not only was first name odd, but the second was, too–I’ve only met one other Kathlyn in my entire life.
    Cheryl

  11. Hey, Tanya!

    I did the same thing with my daughter– Jessica. That year, that was the most popular name. She was on a little league girls’ softball team with 6 other Jessicas!

    Cheryl

  12. Hi Jeannene,

    I puzzle for an eternity over my heroes’ and heroines’ names, too. Biblical names are usually strong sounding and some of them are very unusual.
    Cheryl

  13. Hi Patricia,

    I used to work with a girl named Siobhan. I’ve always loved that name and thought of using it, and maybe I will when/if I ever do a romance set in Ireland. I agree that parents truly should consider their children having to explain their name at every turn throughout their lives. For a while, I thought I would just change my name to “Kathy”, my middle name being Kathlyn, but we lived in a small town and I never did it.LOL
    Cheryl

  14. Hey Mary,
    I am laughing at your response–I’ve used Rafe and Kaed, and have a WIP with the hero named Nick. I wonder how many romances there are with the hero’s name being Nick? LOL Probably a HUGE number, but I still like it and think it’s strong. I love those strong, one-syllable names.
    Cheryl

  15. Hi Connie,

    I love DJ! I knew the cutest little boy once, a friend of my son’s, named DJ, and every time I hear those “initial names” I think of him. Cutest kid, ever!

    Cheryl

  16. Hi Linda,

    LOL I am the same way! Giddy–I like that description. I get excited trying to come up with the “perfect name.” Thanks so much for commenting!
    Cheryl

  17. Hey, Tabitha,

    LOL I answer to anything at this point. I still have relatives that call me SHeryl. So if someone does that, I still just respond and now I don’t even think anything about it.LOL It would be great if we could meet someday, for sure! So glad you enjoyed the excerpts so much, and I hope you enjoy reading Fire Eyes when you get it!

    Thanks for commenting!
    Cheryl

  18. Oh my gosh. I’ve got a Nick, too. I forgot him.

    Kael. Pretty good. Kade. Kane (kinda Biblical bad news to be named Kane…Cane of Cane and Able. Cane’s the bad guy. Abel’s the dead guy. Neither are great)

    Gage. I read a book with a Gage here just recently. I might use that. Kyle is pretty good. I have a bad guy named Mason, his henchmen called him Mase. I sort of wanted to name a hero that. Mase. Mace.

    But now I’ve blown it on a bad guy. Oops.

  19. Mary,
    I love all of these names! Mason is a good one, for sure, and I think it fits a bad guy to be called “Mase”–I like Gage too. That’s a name that’s being used more and more I think. Had to laugh about Kane (Cane) and Abel. Names are so much more than just the sound, aren’t they–it’s the whole meaning, or the thought that the name calls up.
    Cheryl

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